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Exam question: Write about someone who influences you including what they do and how it makes them important.
Read:
Harvey is an unexpected surprise found amongst an average group of friends that you'd see hanging around in the park on a sunny Saturday afternoon. He looks like a normal school boy but he has a real life hero inside him and he unleashes this to his most important people (V.I.Ps in other words).
He helps charities when he is free to bring great entertainment (e.g firework displays) outside of his friendship group. He is determined to meet new people and he is enthusiastic and bright.
Harvey is a well known peace-maker who has sorted out many quarrels and that includes many of mine! Including this he is a joy-bringer as he can bring a smile to anyones face even if they're feeling bluer than blue. He has high spirits and makes the most of them.
He is extremely talented as Harvey is involved in many sports including rugby, which teaches you a lot about life and cricket, which is a long game that involves a rather large amount of patience!
Rugby is based in the winter and since the start of the season he has managed to win all of them and even recieve "man of the match" status. He plays for ********* down at the rugby club and spends most of his time down there to avoid seeing me ;) LOL jks. and I have seen a couple of his games and wow :')
Cricket is in the summer and is very common in parks with picniks or at the pub with well...the pub food of course! Harvey plays for **********. Although I have yet to see him play, I can imagine him being quite a player (; I once went to see the cricket with my grandparents and I met some famous Cricket players and have learnt that watching this very long game that patience is a virtue!
Anyhow, through this many lessons have been passed on and I appreciate them. I am so lucky to have someone with such a good influence on not just me, but the wider community.
Grade:
Out of 16.
Grade boundries:
1-3: Very poor, Grade F
5-6: Poor, Grade E+
7-8: Average, Grade D+
9-12: Good, Grade C
12-14: Great, Grade B
15: Excellent, Grade A
16: Grade A*
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